Analyzing the English Translation of “Kalit” by Sunray Balasbas Through the Lens of Vinay and Darbelnet`s Translation Model

Abstract

This study analyzed the translation of the Waray poem Kalit by
Sunray Balasbas into English. This identified translation problems
and applied strategies through Vinay and Darbelnet’s (1995)
translation model. Employing a qualitative research design,
specifically textual analysis, the study focused on both the
linguistic and cultural dimensions of translation. The researchers
translated the poem, documented problems, and analyzed how
direct and oblique translation strategies, such as borrowing, calque,
literal translation, modulation, transposition, and equivalence, were
applied. Findings revealed key problems including lexical gaps,
idiomatic expressions, grammatical differences, and the
preservation of emotional tone. The study found that using Vinay and Darbelnet’s framework allowed for
a nuanced translation that maintained the cultural depth and poetic integrity of the source text.The study
concludes that translating regional literature demands not only linguistic accuracy but also a deep
understanding of cultural context, emotional tone, and stylistic intent. This reinforces Hatim and
Munday’s (2004) argument that effective literary translation balances fidelity to the source with
readability in the target language. Recommendations include integrating translation theory into classroom
instruction, using regional literature in translation exercises, and encouraging flexible strategies for
student translators. Future researchers are encouraged to explore comparative translations across
languages and examine reader reception to better understand the impact of translated regional texts. The
development of a glossary of culturally specific Waray terms is also suggested to support future
translation efforts.